Correction faute anglais urgent Salut . En faite j'ai fait un résumé en anglais et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai fait des fautes de conjugaison ortho etc ... merci
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Correction faute anglais urgent
Salut . En faite j'ai fait un résumé en anglais et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai fait des fautes de conjugaison ortho etc ... merci d'avance
Victor Frankenstein is a scientist Born into a noble family, , he wants to discover the secret of life. Dr. Victor Frankenstein , decides in his laboratory to create a man with body parts, he use the energie of the lightning
When the "man" wake up the doctor was shocked when he discovers his creation who is a frightening ugliness (a big forhead and a yellow wrinkled skin)
Terrified by the ugliness of the "monster" he decide to abandons his creature
Rejected by the doctor, the monster ( who is sad )decides to committing evil by murdering people
The monster promises to leave humans in peace if Frankenstein makes for him a companion ( a woman ) . The scientist create that but destroyed his work at the last moment, because he tell it's dangereous
For his revenge , the monster kills Clerval, Frankenstein's best friend,and Elizabeth in her night of wedding ( elizabeth is the wife of victor )
Victor decides to chase the creature, to the North Pole. He was freezing to death, telling his story before dying at Captain Walton, explorer who collected victor on his boat. The monster filled with remorse set himself on fire
Salut . En faite j'ai fait un résumé en anglais et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai fait des fautes de conjugaison ortho etc ... merci d'avance
Victor Frankenstein is a scientist Born into a noble family, , he wants to discover the secret of life. Dr. Victor Frankenstein , decides in his laboratory to create a man with body parts, he use the energie of the lightning
When the "man" wake up the doctor was shocked when he discovers his creation who is a frightening ugliness (a big forhead and a yellow wrinkled skin)
Terrified by the ugliness of the "monster" he decide to abandons his creature
Rejected by the doctor, the monster ( who is sad )decides to committing evil by murdering people
The monster promises to leave humans in peace if Frankenstein makes for him a companion ( a woman ) . The scientist create that but destroyed his work at the last moment, because he tell it's dangereous
For his revenge , the monster kills Clerval, Frankenstein's best friend,and Elizabeth in her night of wedding ( elizabeth is the wife of victor )
Victor decides to chase the creature, to the North Pole. He was freezing to death, telling his story before dying at Captain Walton, explorer who collected victor on his boat. The monster filled with remorse set himself on fire
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1. Réponse Neyoz90
he decides le s n'oublie pas.. -
2. Réponse Loyette
of the life
energy
When the "man" wake up the doctor was shocked when he discovers his creation who is a frightening ugliness (a big forhead and a yellow wrinkled skin) <- You should write it down with the past time : woke up discovered was