Bonjouuuuuurs tout le monde j'aurai besoin d'un ptit coup de pouce svp en anglais pour me corriger : Good Evening! I don't no know what to say I am extremely sa
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Bonjouuuuuurs tout le monde j'aurai besoin d'un ptit coup de pouce svp en anglais pour me corriger :
Good Evening! I don't no know what to say I am extremely sad but mostly angry and furious.My son was a happy child and always smiling. Mothers are not supposed to outlive their children.I lost my son in this tragedy! I dont understand how can such a tragedy happen in a school.Our children are not safe! there is no longer any protection.The state gives individuals the freedom to walk around with a weapon.Nobody does anything to protect our children.I am destroyed! I have my daughter is at the first grade in the same school.I do not want to happen to him the same thing. I intend to abolish the right to own guns.
In this case it is necessary to find other effective ways to protect our children.Secure schools by installing an armed guard in every American school to prevent further killings. Secure the gate of the school with a code.Reduce the carrying of arms of the US population.
I am not going to say it more on this matter. I am still in shock. It will be everything for me thank you.
Good Evening! I don't no know what to say I am extremely sad but mostly angry and furious.My son was a happy child and always smiling. Mothers are not supposed to outlive their children.I lost my son in this tragedy! I dont understand how can such a tragedy happen in a school.Our children are not safe! there is no longer any protection.The state gives individuals the freedom to walk around with a weapon.Nobody does anything to protect our children.I am destroyed! I have my daughter is at the first grade in the same school.I do not want to happen to him the same thing. I intend to abolish the right to own guns.
In this case it is necessary to find other effective ways to protect our children.Secure schools by installing an armed guard in every American school to prevent further killings. Secure the gate of the school with a code.Reduce the carrying of arms of the US population.
I am not going to say it more on this matter. I am still in shock. It will be everything for me thank you.
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse stabilomaths
Je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire par : " mothers are not supposed to outlive their children." -
2. Réponse mrksh
- I don't know
- mostly à ta place je le remplacerai par mainly (principalement)
- an happy/ he was always smiling
- mothers blabla je pense que t'as voulu dire "une mère n'est pas supposée vivre sans son enfant ?"
mais je dirais "a mother are not supposed to live without her children"
- how such a tragedy can happen
- there's no protection anymore
- gives to
- I have my daughter who is in the first grade
- I don't want her to happen the same thing
- another shooting
- à ta place je dirais I'm going to finish on these words about that
Me corriger si j'ai dit des trucs pas bons ;)