Pouvez vous me corriger si il ya des eurreur ou pas Hey Suzy! You will not believe it! I won a weekend in NY! I am very happy, I am the winner of the American m
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Hey Suzy! You will not believe it! I won a weekend in NY! I am very happy, I am the winner of the American magazine MAGAZINE. I fly Friday at noon! I spend my weekends at the hotel PARK HYATT NEW YORK This is one of the finest hotels in New York, I will visit Central Park and see the tall buildings! and visited the museum Solomon and remember the Statue of Liberty is one of the most famous landmarks in the city of New York, is located on the island of Liberty Island south of Manhattan! Is not that fantastic? I can not wait! I'm so excited, I hope to have time to visit everything! I can not believe that this will be the best day of my life! I take pictures in my new camera and I'll show them to my return Monday morning :) Cu XOXOXO
Hey Suzy! You will not believe it! I won a weekend in NY! I am very happy, I am the winner of the American magazine MAGAZINE. I fly Friday at noon! I spend my weekends at the hotel PARK HYATT NEW YORK This is one of the finest hotels in New York, I will visit Central Park and see the tall buildings! and visited the museum Solomon and remember the Statue of Liberty is one of the most famous landmarks in the city of New York, is located on the island of Liberty Island south of Manhattan! Is not that fantastic? I can not wait! I'm so excited, I hope to have time to visit everything! I can not believe that this will be the best day of my life! I take pictures in my new camera and I'll show them to my return Monday morning :) Cu XOXOXO
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1. Réponse alisoncntrs
Hey Suzy! You will not believe it! I won a weekend in NY! I am very happy, I am the winner of the American magazine MAGAZINE. I will fly there on Friday at noon! I will spend my weekends at the PARK HYATT NEW YORK Hotel. This is one of the finest hotels in New York. I will visit Central Park and see the tall buildings! Moreover, I will visit the Solomon museum. I know the Statue of Liberty is one of the most famous landmarks in the city of New York, it is located on Liberty Island at the south of Manhattan! It is fantastic, isn't it? I can't wait! I'm so excited, I hope I will have time to visit everything! I can not believe it ! It will be the best day of my life! I will take pictures with my new camera and I'll show them to my return on Monday morning :) Cu XOXOXO -
2. Réponse mariama19
je ne vois pas de faute tu devrais seulement remplacer NY par new york