Bonjour, J'ai un projet d'anglais pour demain et je ne peux pas vérifier si mes phrases sont correctes ... Je dois donc présenter une ville sur certaines caract
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Bonjour,
J'ai un projet d'anglais pour demain et je ne peux pas vérifier si mes phrases sont correctes ... Je dois donc présenter une ville sur certaines caractéristiques (attractions etc ...). C'est un projet relativement court, mais je veux être sûre de ne pas avoir fait d'erreurs, ou du moins un minimum ... Le voici :
Hello and welcome !
I'm Margot, I'm a student and I would like to introduce you the great city of Birmingham, which is the most populous city in England outside London.
You want something exciting to do ?
If you have an artistic soul or if you love history, you can visit the Birmingham Museum & Art Gallery, but if you are gourmand, you may prefer the Cadbury World, the museum of the delicious brand of british chocolate ! And to cool off, what is better than discover the National Sea Life Centre ?
Time for shopping ?
The Bull Ring is a major commercial area, which was the busiest in the United Kingdom in 2004, with shops like Selfridges, Forever 21 or the fourth largest Debenhams.
If you love having fun and partying, the Broad Street is made for you ! You would find one of the biggest GateCrasher nightclub, the Bar Risa or the Grosvenor Casino.
Are you a good sportsman ? Because in 2015, Birmingham will be hosting two matches of the Rugby World Cup at Villa Park. But if you prefer calmer sports, you can go to the Edgbaston Cricket Field or the Belfry golf resort.
Pfiou ! That makes me hungry ! And if you want some delicious food, you can go to the world famous Balti Triangle or to the Digbeth Dining Club !
Hope you will have a great time in Birmingham and see you soon ! Goodbye !
Merci d'avance.
J'ai un projet d'anglais pour demain et je ne peux pas vérifier si mes phrases sont correctes ... Je dois donc présenter une ville sur certaines caractéristiques (attractions etc ...). C'est un projet relativement court, mais je veux être sûre de ne pas avoir fait d'erreurs, ou du moins un minimum ... Le voici :
Hello and welcome !
I'm Margot, I'm a student and I would like to introduce you the great city of Birmingham, which is the most populous city in England outside London.
You want something exciting to do ?
If you have an artistic soul or if you love history, you can visit the Birmingham Museum & Art Gallery, but if you are gourmand, you may prefer the Cadbury World, the museum of the delicious brand of british chocolate ! And to cool off, what is better than discover the National Sea Life Centre ?
Time for shopping ?
The Bull Ring is a major commercial area, which was the busiest in the United Kingdom in 2004, with shops like Selfridges, Forever 21 or the fourth largest Debenhams.
If you love having fun and partying, the Broad Street is made for you ! You would find one of the biggest GateCrasher nightclub, the Bar Risa or the Grosvenor Casino.
Are you a good sportsman ? Because in 2015, Birmingham will be hosting two matches of the Rugby World Cup at Villa Park. But if you prefer calmer sports, you can go to the Edgbaston Cricket Field or the Belfry golf resort.
Pfiou ! That makes me hungry ! And if you want some delicious food, you can go to the world famous Balti Triangle or to the Digbeth Dining Club !
Hope you will have a great time in Birmingham and see you soon ! Goodbye !
Merci d'avance.
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1. Réponse soulinebasit
bonjour c'est bien mais tu as juste en ligne 4(the most POPULAR) et tout est juste mais je pense aussi que tu dois enlever les (pfiou..hello..) car vous ecrivez et non pas racontez et j'espère que je t'aidais...